December 7, 2007
Works
1
Be rewarded candy and other things --> Reward herself --> Gain weight --> Be teased by people --> Feel sorry for herself --> Perceive herself as fat --> Can't be on diet --> Overeating -> Obesity
2.
It is such a good idea that everyone in the class agree.
3.
Some of the people were so hungry that they could eat everything.
Posted by Phuong on December 7, 2007 at 07:35 PM | 3 comments
Adough
The clauses of effect are good (but what verb tense do you want in #2?), but where is your "clause of cause"?
babygirl07
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